Brenden’s Pizza Logo

I created this logo for the website fakeclients.com. The prompt reads, “Hey! I am Branden, I recently started a new business called Branden’s Pizzas. I am looking for someone who can design a professional logo for my business. I would like the logo to be an abstract mark. Can you do that?” I created an abstract pizza by making a circle. I added a triangle into the circle and divided them up. I added red circles to symbolize pepperoni in the pizza. The typefaces I chose were Futura PT and Sarah Script. Someone in the comment section from fakeclients.com responded to me with feedback: “I like the concept you have here. I might suggest watching the spacing between letters. There seems to be too much space between the letters in ‘pizza’. This second font also adds unwanted negative space between Branden & Pizza. I’d consider making them the same font.”